What do you think of my poem/lyrics?

to be honest with you, i think it is truly beautiful and amazing. it touched my heart, and i feel in the same predicament that the lyrics/poem are stating. i think that it is very pretty, sad, and emotional. the only problem i would have, is that if it were a song, it would be kinda short; as a poem it's amazing, and i love it!(: try adding more if you wanna make it a song.. LOVE IT!(: